Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Another Trappers' Hut story from East Greenland




Another cabin story.....posted on Facebook but worth sharing........ This cabin is an old and battered trapper's hut in East Greenland, in the area where we worked in 1962 with the OU East Greenland Expedition.   In 1970 a member of another expedition came across the hut and decided to stop the night there. There was no means of lighting, so he thought he'd root around to see if there were any candles anywhere. In a dark windowless room at the end of the shack he found a big box which seemed to contain a nice supply of candles. It was too dark to see what he was doing. So he lit a match and was just about to light one of the "candles" when he realized that it felt a bit squishy. So he looked more carefully at it, by the light of the match flame, and saw that it was a stick of dynamite. The box was full of old sticks of dynamite, obviously left by some geological prospecting party years before. (The explosives had probably been intended for geophysical / seismic work.)  Not only that, but next to the box were some glass jars that contained nitro glycerine.......... so there we are then. 

The explorer lived to tell the tale. Take whatever lessons from it that may be appropriate......

Guardian Angel now on Kindle





This is just to let you know that Guardian Angel" (vol 6 in the Angel Mountain Saga) is now available via Amazon in a Kindle edition.  At a ludicrously low price.  Here is the link if you want to get it:

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00GAN6EM4

This hasn't been the most popular of the Angel Mountain books (mind you, it's still sold 2,000 copies, so that counts as a best-seller in Wales) -- partly because many readers thought that with Martha having died at the end of "Flying with Angels", that was that.  But they hadn't reckoned with the fact that Martha is indestructible..........

And I do have a soft spot for this story.  It's really an allegory or a fairy story, told in a somewhat tongue-in-cheek fashion, and with hardly any real violence in it.  It's a GREAT contrast with the story told in "Sacrifice" which followed as number 7 in the series. 

There are several characters in this story for whom I have very soft spot -- including the child Merlin, the policeman who says everything at least twice because he thinks it makes him sound "official", and of course Wilmot Gwynne......

Acts of God -- the Album




  For those who want to check out the location in which the new story is set, I've assembled an album on Facebook.  Just click on the link, and off you go into an exotic world of glaciers, gigantic fjords and mountains, trackless tundra, and ice-infested waters, populated by mad power-crazed villains, polar bears and bemused Greenlanders........ with a group of innocent explorers caught up in very dark deeds.  There -- that's enough purple prose for the time being......

https://www.facebook.com/brian.john.526/media_set?set=a.720426031306099.1073741830.100000161271278&type=3




Acts of God -- progress report


 Inside one of the East Greenland trappers huts -- one rather like this figures prominently in the story.  I love this photo -- the texture and muted colour of the wood and the single bright splash of colour in the rusty kettle.......

I have just finished the third draft of the new novel -- incorporating a multitude of changes as suggested by my faithful and ever-helpful readers.   For the most part, the comments were exactly in tune with what was in my own mind.   I created the first draft at very high speed -- about a fortnight of writing -- and intended that it should tell the story in bare outlines, sticking to the thriller format of keeping things MOVING at all times!  I knew that in thrillers you don't have much time to spend on purple prose and character development -- in many thrillers you really have no idea what the hero looks like or what motivates him, and more often than not you couldn't care less.....  Speed is what matters, and to hell with depth.  But that's not very satisfying from an author's point of view -- the interactions between characters are what gives novels their appeal, and a story is much more likely to be popular (I hope!) if the reader empathises with the main characters and actually has an interest in what happens to them as the story unfolds.

So the main comment was that the characters had to be fleshed out more -- and I have obliged on that score, while pushing the word count up from 67,000 to 97,000.  There are now much better descriptions of the key players in the story, many more interactions between them, a whole host of moral dilemmas, new characters who bring extra dimensions to the story, many more adventure episodes, and a more fully fleshed out climax to the story. 

The next task is to find an agent ---- and things are moving along on that front.

In the meantime, I keep on finding more and more fantastic images of the area in which the story is set.  East Greenland -- it doesn't get much more exotic!




Thursday, 29 August 2013

On Angel Mountain back in stock



I have just had the delivery on the new printing of "On Angel Mountain."  This is my 7th printing, and I'm not sure how many other printings there were for the Corgi edition.  No matter -- total sales are now over 30,000.......

For the first time I have used a digital printing process -- from Cambrian Printers in Aberystwyth.  I'm very impressed with the quality.

Sorry if anybody has been trying to get a copy without success.  I have topped up most of the Pembs outlets -- just a few still to go.  You can always order online as well:

http://www.angel-mountain.info/

Thursday, 22 August 2013

The New Novel


Many of my readers have been asking about the progress of my new novel, which they have heard rumours about from various quarters........  Well, the first thing to do is to make the point that the new story has NOTHING WHATSOEVER to do with Mistress Martha.  I have been feeling like a change of genre for some time, and with 8 novels about my feisty heroine done and dusted, I thought there was more than a little danger of getting stuck in a rut, living too comfortably in the comfort zone, and assorted other cliches.  So I thought that something more challenging might be a good idea.  Something aimed more specifically at a male readership (although there are many happy male readers of the Angel Mountain books, the fact of the matter is that most of my readers have been women, since women do seem to be more interested in historical fiction with a strong female lead character.  Strange, that....)

Anyway, for the last year or so I have been mulling over the basic storyline for a new novel set in Greenland, based very loosely indeed on my experiences as joint leader of the Oxford University East Greenland Expedition 1962.   (Yes, it was a VERY long time ago........)  But it was during the Cold War, and gradually a "Cold War Chiller Thriller" has taken shape.


The central part of the East Greenland coast, the most spectacular fjord coastline on earth.

During the summer break in Sweden -- in June and July -- I worked out quite a detailed synopsis, and I started on the first draft of the novel at the beginning of August.  Now it's done.  Three weeks of fairly intensive work, culminating in a mad session last Tuesday during which I banged out the last 4 chapters and 16,000 words.  I thought afterwards, having worked so fast, that maybe it was all rubbish, but Inger has assured me that it was not, and that she really quite enjoyed the last part of the novel even though she is a woman.  So far so good........  now I need at least six male readers to have a critical go at the text, and to be honest with me!  After that, I have to decide what to do with the manuscript -- agent, publisher, Ebook, self-publication?   Decisions, decisions......

I have made two rather nice location maps, so that people can follow the story more effectively.  Here they are (click to enlarge):


I am of course sworn to secrecy as to the contents of the story, but here is a draft cover blurb, just to give a feeling for it:

This is a fast-moving thriller in the tradition of Alistair MacLean, Clive Cussler and Hammond Innes, set in a magnificent yet deadly polar environment. It is also an inspiring story of comradeship and survival against overwhelming odds.

At the height of the Cold War in 1962, ten young men arrive in the Arctic wilderness of East Greenland, on an expedition from Oxford University. The party is led by Ed Lawson and Stephen Hanna, both just 22 years old. They expect to enjoy the adventure of a lifetime, and to undertake scientific work in the most spectacular fjord landscape on earth. But as soon as they arrive, things start to go wrong, and following a series of close encounters with death they realize that their misfortunes are not occurring purely by chance. The explorers are too inquisitive and too intelligent for their own good, and after some weeks in the field they realize that they know too much, and that they are being hunted down by an invisible and implacable enemy. Prematurely their research plans have to be abandoned, and their adventure turns into a fight for survival. As the death toll mounts, the people of a small Inuit settlement are also caught up in a conflict which they want nothing to do with. At last the explorers get angry, and although they have no weapons and no means of transport, they are fit and they know how to survive in the Arctic. Their only option is to go onto the offensive, in the full knowledge that they will probably not come out of the conflict alive.

So there we are then.  For developments over the coming months, watch this space........

The other thing I have done, to enhance the reading pleasure of those who might be interested in a story of this type, set in the real world, is to put together a rather splendid collection of images from the key locations -- Kjove Land, Syd Kap, Bear Islands. Schuchert Dal, Stauning Alps, Nordvest Fjord, Jameson Land etc.  The pictures can be seen here:


Just one other thing.  Because of possible sensitivity, I have changed three key place nemes in the manuscript.  So Mesters Vig has become Blyhavn, Scoresbysund (the settlement) has become Sandvig, and Malmbjerg (Erzberg) has become Himmelbjerg.  Is that all clear?  Good.






Wednesday, 21 August 2013

Delivery tomorrow...



In case anybody has been wondering, the seventh printing of "On Angel Mountain" should be with me from the printers tomorrow -- been getting quite a few requests for it, but sadly I have been totally cleaned out of stock at the Greencroft Books warehouse (ie our attic....)

So hang in there -- I'll try to get stocks out on Friday.

In the meantime, here are a couple of recent pics to remind us that Angel Mountain is as beautiful as ever -- typical autumn colours, and I don't think I've ever seen the heather looking better!